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ds or DS

double space

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ds or DS	double space
ref.	reference	not clear what a pronoun is referring to

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vt

verb tense

Incorrect verb tense

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vf

verb form

The verb is written incorrectly.

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My system for writing notes on student papers:

November 13, 2007, at 01:43 AM by 58.12.220.158 -

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Parallel structure needs to be used

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parallel

Parallel structure needs to be used

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rw	rewrite
ww	wrong word
agr.	agreement
wf	wrong form
sp	spelling
wo	word order
?	don't understand
wc	word choice
cc	combine sentences
\|\|	parallel
art.	article
obj.	needs object of verb
trans.	transition
sf	sentence fragment

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Abbreviation	Full Form	Explanation
rw	rewrite	A phrase is not clear either because of word order sometimes multiple errors and needs to be rewritten
agr.	agreement	There is an agreement problem that needs to be fixed
wf	wrong form	The word is OK, but the wrong form is used and so needs to be changed
sp	spelling	A word is spelled incorrectly
wo	word order	Words are generally correct but the sentence is in the wrong order, sometimes like Japanese
?	don't understand	The part that is underlined or circled is difficult or impossible to understand and needs to be rewritten
wc, ww	word choice	Wrong word has been chosen, though the meaning might be similar a better word must be used here
cc	combine sentences	Two sentences can be combined into one often in the case where "as," "but," or "so" are used on the second sentence
\|\|	parallel	Parallel structure needs to be used
art.	article	Mistake in "the," "a," or "an."
obj.	needs object of verb	A verb that requires an object has none, so it needs to be added
trans.	transition	A transition is missing or used incorrectly.
sf	sentence fragment	It is not a complete sentence. Usually a verb is missing.

November 12, 2007, at 10:40 PM by 58.12.220.158 -

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agr

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agr.

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article

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art.

article

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parallel

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rw	rewrite
ww	wrong word

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rw	rewrite
ww	wrong word
agr.	agr
wf	wrong form
sp	spelling
wo	word order
?	don't understand
wc	word choice
cc	combine sentences
\|\|	parallel
art.]]	article
obj.	needs object of verb
trans.	transition

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Syllabus

Sorry, nothing here yet

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Criterion

http://etsln04.ets.org/cwe/

Writing Codes:

rw	rewrite
ww	wrong word

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Sorry, nothing here yet, but the blog works:

http://tw.popear.org/weblog/

Papers

Things to not forget:

Have you properly written the title, your name, date, etc?
Do your citations match your references?
Grades on First Draft:

	First Number is Writing

5: Very good 4: OK 3: finish, but needs major changes

	Second Number is Self-evaluation

3: It looks like you thought about it. 2: Not much thought shown here. (Especially the part about: �EACH paragraph in the body��

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Sorry, nothing here yet

April 13, 2006, at 10:09 PM by Brian -

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Sorry, nothing here yet, but the blog works:

http://tw.popear.org/weblog/

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Syllabus

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Have you properly written your name, date

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Have you properly written the title, your name, date, etc?

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Final Paper

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Papers

Things to not forget:

Have you properly written your name, date
Do your citations match your references?
Grades on First Draft:

	First Number is Writing

5: Very good 4: OK 3: finish, but needs major changes

	Second Number is Self-evaluation

3: It looks like you thought about it. 2: Not much thought shown here. (Especially the part about: �EACH paragraph in the body��

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Final Paper ?

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Final Paper

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Final Paper

Things to check for:

1. Have you properly

1. Do your citations match your references?

Grades on First Draft:

	First Number is Writing

5: Very good 4: OK 3: Major parts missing

	Second Number is Self-evaluation

3: It looks like you thought about it. 2: Not much thought shown here. (Especially the part about: �EACH paragraph in the body��

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Final Paper ?

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Grades on First Draft:

	First Number is Writing

5: Very good 4: OK 3: Major parts missing

	Second Number is Self-evaluation

3: It looks like you thought about it. 2: Not much thought shown here. (Especially the part about: �EACH paragraph in the body��

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Final Paper

Things to check for:

1. Have you properly

1. Do your citations match your references?

Classes

Research

OJC info

Media

Design

Computer

Software

Politics

Teaching and Learning

Learning Japanese

Main.Religion

Music

Family

Family ?

Serendipity

Wiki Thoughts

PmWiki

Topic Writing

Classes.TopicWriting History

Writing Codes:

My system for writing notes on student papers:

Syllabus

Sorry, nothing here yet

Criterion

Writing Codes:

Sorry, nothing here yet, but the blog works:

Papers

Things to not forget:

Sorry, nothing here yet

Sorry, nothing here yet, but the blog works:

Syllabus

Papers

Things to not forget: