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• Pacifist is people who against war and take action for permanent peace.
  • this is a definition not a thesis statement

• Pacifism means against war, and try to keep the peace.
  • This is a definition not a thesis statement

• Pacifist's purpose is to recover peace. To take action, each bravery and power are needed.
  • This is better, but you need to think about what you would write about under this idea and rewrite thesis statement.

• There have been a lot of wars over oil and enegy ever, such as the Gulf war, the Afghan war, and most recently the Iraq war.

• Nature and technology can be compared following 3 points: necessity, how influence in our life and how to use efficiently.
  • I like this!

• There are two problems about food: satiation and hunger.
  • I'm not sure what this means, rewrite.

• Pacifist and financer are related to the war, the problem of the poverty and the development.
  • Sounds o.k. I think, but needs to be clearer

• Although technology makes our life comfortable,better technology kills many people in the war and it brings only sad result.

• Technology can be used for both of good and bad.For example,technology is used for war,and making weapon,however,we can use technology for solar system,and recycling system which help the nature.

• There are a lot of oils in Iraq.Developed countries need them for their not

simplicity life.In order to this,the Iraq war began.The war is to get oils,and use them a lot in the war.Wars and oils are not separate.

• Technology has two aspect,which make us happy or unhappy like peace or war.

• Now we use too much energy, and we are confronting many problems in terms of resourses on the earth is limited, it makes war to get more energy among countries and to use a lot of energy causes global warming.

• We should think how technology influence to war by three points: make more strong weapons, increase victims and developmentof computer.

• Human beings depend on natural resourses, but they are said to disappear for 50 years late. We should consider seriously this crisis because natural resourses such as oil, water, might disappear in the future.

• In order to make the whole world peaceful, each of us should think about the pacifist in these points: how they think about UN, wars and their personal peace.